When I finally reached the second floor I finally saw myself in college studying to be a doctor. I see my parents tearing up grateful to see me having something that they always wanted to have a "diploma."
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In the first floor of my present I see me taking the LEAP and while some pupils were weeping I was shouting and skipping when I found out I passed.
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In the basement of my past I saw a light that made me remember my cousins and I playing with fire. The bright light shone and burned just like the fire that we made. Then I transported myself to the first floor.
1 comment:
I really like this poem. You use alot of vivid words, such as, shouting, shone, skipping, ect. I can see what you are talking about. Nice Job!
Love,
Sarah Guillen
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